To the Death of My Inner Editor

Saw this at fellow NaNoer Ragnell's place and, well, you know me and memes.



Attempt #1 (Sorry the writing's so small. Click and make it grow.)













Attempt #2:













Had to crop it a bit because I'm insane like that. Really long original image with nothing but architecture past old double D and I just had to monkey with the composition a bit.